Score: 7

"It sounds pretty cool but..."

submission: Anime Idea/Design

date: July 16, 2009

The idea sounds pretty cool, but you should probably invest in a better animator if you want anybody to take you seriously. No offense, but your guys look pretty... well... bad.
The story seems pretty well thought out, but there are a few minor details you might want to change (ie the specs of the diamond soldier suit) to keep the story from jumping the shark. Its kind of hard to take a story seriously when you have an android piloted by a captured soul shooting ice and fire out of his hands.
I'd even recommend changing the "captured soul" thing if it weren't a crucial part of the story. Like, if its a changeable detail, you might want to make it a mortally wounded soldier's soul or something.

All and all, it seems like a pretty solid idea, there are just a few details you might want to change to make it at least somewhat believable.
Good luck!

Score: 8

"It Certainly Made Me Happy"

submission: Happy Fast Food

date: July 11, 2009

Pretty well done animation. The only criticism I have is that the cashier's walk cycle was kinda sloppy. You could probably fix it in about 10 - 20 minutes of editing frames... But other than that, it was cleverly done. Nice Job.

Score: 10

"Color Would Make This an 11"

submission: Alice!! in Wndrlnd? -2nd-

date: June 29, 2009

This is a really well done animation, but I think if you went back and added detail and color to the characters then it would be even better. One of the distinctive features of Alice in Wonderland is the bizarre and colorful landscape. You pulled it off pretty nicely in black and white, but color would have given this the extra umph that it needs. Still 10 stars because everything (aside from the lack of color) is absolutely superb.