TheManEatingCar's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Anime Idea/Design]

It sounds pretty cool but...

The idea sounds pretty cool, but you should probably invest in a better animator if you want anybody to take you seriously. No offense, but your guys look pretty... well... bad.
The story seems pretty well thought out, but there are a few minor details you might want to change (ie the specs of the diamond soldier suit) to keep the story from jumping the shark. Its kind of hard to take a story seriously when you have an android piloted by a captured soul shooting ice and fire out of his hands.
I'd even recommend changing the "captured soul" thing if it weren't a crucial part of the story. Like, if its a changeable detail, you might want to make it a mortally wounded soldier's soul or something.

All and all, it seems like a pretty solid idea, there are just a few details you might want to change to make it at least somewhat believable.
Good luck!

Jage1992 responds:

Thanks very much for the review. I shall change some of the perks, definately the shoes, and I shall make up the name for a super strong metal making them very hard to destroy or something. The hand actually kind of detaches and from the place where it used to be, a small cannon like thing will pop out with inter changeable modes, although I didn't really make this very clear!

Thanks for the review!
If you fancy a peak at the teaser trailer, you can find it here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wuHy4M NEm-s

TOODLES!
Jage

[Happy Fast Food]

It Certainly Made Me Happy

Pretty well done animation. The only criticism I have is that the cashier's walk cycle was kinda sloppy. You could probably fix it in about 10 - 20 minutes of editing frames... But other than that, it was cleverly done. Nice Job.

JohnLorique responds:

THANK YOU!!!